Friday Fictioneers 100 word challenge/ My 100 word Flash Fiction called .....Cabin Fever
Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin
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She never meant to stay this long. The trip up the mountain to their cabin was just to get him
to sign the papers and say good-bye to the person she had loved since high
school. But when the weather changed
suddenly, she found herself trapped with a man and a place she distasted.
But faith played its last card, giving them time to truly talk
about their problems. By the first thaw they had found their way back to love.
She had an aversion to anything rustic, but his oversized shirts and rugged boots were stylish in the right settings.
Thank you ......Friday Fictioneers
Thank you ......Friday Fictioneers
Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin
awww December romance, love this :) and a cabin is just the perfect setting
ReplyDeleteDear Glynis,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful story...the kind that makes me smile all over.
Only a quarrel with grammar..."and a place she distaste" doesn't makes sense to me. Perhaps disliked would be a clearer choice? Or distasted...archaic but proper.
At any rate, this doesn't detract from a lovely romance, full of hope.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you so much Rochelle!
DeleteShalom
Aww,how romantic and beautifully told-I especially loved the last bit Glynis:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you ever so much Atreyee!
DeleteIt's so good to know when love wins ... beautiful piece :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amrit!
DeleteNothing can be better than be locked inside a cabin together -- either they end up killing each other... or the resolve their differences.. city girl vs. country man always work in a romantic setting.
ReplyDeleteThat's true, but lucky for these two they found a resolution.
DeleteThanks Bjorn.
How nice to read a happy ending on my first week with FF!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lizy! Welcome to FF!
DeleteHeart-warming. I was expecting knives or guns.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, but where would she to hide the body? :)
DeleteThanks Patrick!