Friday Fictioneers 100 word Challenge/ Cabin Fever

Friday Fictioneers 100 word challenge/  My 100 word Flash Fiction called .....Cabin Fever

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She never meant to stay this long. The trip up the mountain to their cabin was just to get him to sign the papers and say good-bye to the person she had loved since high school.  But when the weather changed suddenly, she found herself trapped with a man and a place she distasted.


But faith played its last card, giving them time to truly talk about their problems. By the first thaw they had found their way back to love. She had an aversion to anything rustic, but his oversized shirts and rugged  boots were stylish in the right settings.

Thank you ......Friday Fictioneers

Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin

14 comments:

  1. awww December romance, love this :) and a cabin is just the perfect setting

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  2. Dear Glynis,

    What a wonderful story...the kind that makes me smile all over.
    Only a quarrel with grammar..."and a place she distaste" doesn't makes sense to me. Perhaps disliked would be a clearer choice? Or distasted...archaic but proper.

    At any rate, this doesn't detract from a lovely romance, full of hope.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Aww,how romantic and beautifully told-I especially loved the last bit Glynis:-)

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  4. It's so good to know when love wins ... beautiful piece :-)

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  5. Nothing can be better than be locked inside a cabin together -- either they end up killing each other... or the resolve their differences.. city girl vs. country man always work in a romantic setting.

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    1. That's true, but lucky for these two they found a resolution.
      Thanks Bjorn.

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  6. How nice to read a happy ending on my first week with FF!

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  7. Heart-warming. I was expecting knives or guns.

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    1. Interesting, but where would she to hide the body? :)
      Thanks Patrick!

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