Friday Fictioneers/Peephole

THE CHALLENGE:
Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and end. (No one will be ostracized for going a few words over the count.)
THE KEY:
Make every word count.

This week's story is 102 words called..... Peephole
Copyright – Janet Webb
Breathing softly, slowly, pressed against my front door. I make no sound, sipping my sangria while I patiently wait his arrival.   
I listen intently for a key in a lock, an open door, and his heavy footfalls. They call  me to my peephole, hoping for a glimpse of the neighbor next door. Every night I dream of him, yearning to touch his thick sinew, lick dark chocolate skin, but just a glance of his half smile is enough for the evening.

There goes that Ghetto swagger right passed my door. I strain to see his backside as he steps away from view. 


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Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin

16 comments:

  1. she'd better step up her game or she'll end up just fantasizing forever :) i loved the descriptions of a heavy crush

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    1. Thank you theeclecticeccentricshopaholic

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  2. I think it's time for her to make a move - one way or another. Nicely done.

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    1. Fear of rejection is a powerful deterrent.
      Thanks Sandra.

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  3. She's got a serious case of lust - why doesn't she just open the damn door and ask him in?

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    1. We are not all as brave as some Iizy!

      Thanks

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  4. Very descriptive word picture. Well done.

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  5. Valentine's day is here-she should ask him out-no point in watching and lusting after him secretly ;-)Good one!

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    1. Of course you all are right. Nothing ventured nothing gained.
      Thanks Atreyee!

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  6. Dear Glynis,

    I wonder where this could be leading. Perhaps, as others have said, she should declare herself. Nicely done.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you Rochelle,
      It leads to her first opening the door.

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  7. Erotic and naughty. Happy Valentine's Day!~

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    1. Thank you much hugmamma! Happy Valentine to you as well!

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  8. That crush from distance... so overbearing... but yet so tense... wonder if she ever dare to go forward.

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    1. If only she'll open that door to her passion.

      Thanks Bjorn!

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