Welcome Trifectains, friends, followers and visitors to another TrifeXXXtra weekend prompt. So its November 15 National Erotica Day.
Trifecta is not an erotica-specific type of place, but we never shy
away from a chance to stretch our creative limbs, and we hope you’ll
join us as we dive in to celebrate this quirky day. I've decided to give it a try with my 237 word called ...
Hard
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Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin
Hard
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The banging on my
door was hard. When I step to open it, my man stood there staring at me with
hard dark eyes. He shut the door, grabbed me by the neck and put his mouth on
mine hard and demanding.
His kiss scorched my lips while he grasped my behind pulling
me closer to his hard rigged body. I could feel the hard beats of his heart
against my chest and his grinding need while he rubbed his rough hands all over
my body. There was no foreplay, no words just his immediate need that sparked
my own.
We fell hard to the
floor entwined, his pulsating yearning apparent between my thighs. I was
already wet by the time we took off our clothes, hungry for each other. We
touched exposed skin, kissing sweet spots our insatiable need came hard. He
spread my legs and entered, riding me desperately, demanding, endlessly,
hard.
He released into me
all that he held in from the trials of this life.
When he had nothing
more to give, we fell over the abyss. He collapsed across my exposed breast spent.
Then with a weakness he can never show to the world, my man cried hard in my loving embrace. I held him
tight in my arms to weather his storm never saying a word.
When the world gets
too much my man knows he can always come to me, his place of softness and peace
where he can show his vulnerability from a world that’s often too hard.
I hope you enjoyed Hard, and please join in on the fun by going over to Trifecta and adding your link. I'll love to read your words.
Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin
Wow, this is steamy and urgent; compelling and touching at the same time - requires a fine touch like yours, Glynis! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your amazing comment on this piece TZ!
DeleteA wonderfully written, literary, explicit, work. Consistent with all your beautiful writing, Glynis. Well done!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you so much Jo-Anne.
DeleteLove...hard and soft...
ReplyDeleteYes,... we know that to be true in many ways.
DeleteThank you UnawareButUnderlined!
OMG this was gorgeous! His show of vulnerability at the end had me in tears as well-that, and the fact that when there is a hard banging at my door it's usually only the mail man;)
ReplyDeleteWell done, Glynis!
LOL! Thank you Valerie.... for your lovely comment and for making me laugh.
DeleteSteamy, yet tenderly romantic. I love the emphasis on connection between the lovers as a way to share the burden of a hard life.
ReplyDeleteI love that you saw that TMW! It was just what I was going for....thank you.
DeleteI like the raw emotions in this. Great work.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Draug! I
DeleteGreat job capturing the intensity of passion and vulnerability. Incredible.
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Thank you so much Momo!
DeleteOh, I'll have to look into that issue. That's for pointing it out!
I loved the urgency and need conveyed in this
ReplyDeleteThank so much Thomas!
DeleteWonderful - this had a real hot urgency of it
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bjorn!
DeleteGlynis, I love this! So well written. Very clever the way you folding different aspects of "hard" into the story. Tender, romantic, lovely and hot!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ivy!
DeleteSuch a beautiful last paragraph, after that hard core romp!
ReplyDeleteLOL! Thank you so much Kymm!
DeleteLoved the soft core under all that hard:-)Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Atreyee!
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