Trifecta Challenge Weekend/ Haiku


Trifecta Challenge Weekend.
Welcome everyone and thank you for coming. This weekend's prompt.

HAIKU (noun) : an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively - 


My contribution is called Spring Shower



Gray skies hiding blue
Thunder piecing silence, Hues
 Springs hope eternal

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Thank you for reading

Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin

21 comments:

  1. JannaTWritesAugust 31, 2013 at 12:31 AM

    I the eternal hope in the end...we've had evening storms the last couple days and I've so enjoyed it!

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    1. glynis rankinAugust 31, 2013 at 12:23 PM

      I love them as well! The always bring me a sense of hope and renewal.

      Thank so much for the lovely comment.

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  2. brudbergAugust 31, 2013 at 10:31 AM

    aahh rings true... eternal hope sounds nice

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  3. SandraAugust 31, 2013 at 11:36 AM

    This piece reminds me that I've grown to embrace enormous thunderstorms, something I never did when I was younger.

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    1. glynis rankinAugust 31, 2013 at 12:27 PM

      I've found that no matter when you come around to embracing the splendor of nature and all her forms, she welcomes you home with an opens smile.

      Thank you Sandra for such a lovely comment.

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    2. glynis rankinAugust 31, 2013 at 1:16 PM

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  4. LaTonya BaldwinAugust 31, 2013 at 3:24 PM

    The first three lines alone are complete. Appreciate the message.

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  5. Valerie BoersmaAugust 31, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    And thank you for writing this! It was absolutely lovely!!

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  6. TMWHickmanAugust 31, 2013 at 9:05 PM

    You can't help but feel hopeful after a storm. Beautiful!

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  7. SuzanneSeptember 1, 2013 at 7:20 AM

    Beautifully done Glynis!

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  8. TrifectaSeptember 1, 2013 at 8:54 AM

    What a beautiful description of a rainstorm. Fitting for a haiku. Thank you for linking up!

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2013 at 5:00 PM

    Love the mood hidden in showers!

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  10. kymmSeptember 1, 2013 at 5:18 PM

    Agree that the first three lines do it.

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