Another weekend and the people over at Trifextra has given us another challenge. This weekend's prompt is to write 33 words inspired by the following photo by Eirik Solheim. My contribution is called Replicate.
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| by Eirik Solheim. |
This is my place to meditate
to excavate and
educate
while I rejuvenate
I reverberate, nature
Tessellate never discriminate
I celebrate my seasons all
overrate, Spring
underate Winter
underate Winter
each a necessitate
for replica
Thank you for reading my poem, how about joining us? It's easy just check out the Trifexta site for information. I hope you have a great weekend.
My favorite is the opening - meditate, excavate and educate are all verbs that conjure up images of action and change. All needed to cultivate our spirits. Ooh, I added an "ate" word, in keeping with your poem :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, thank Janna for reading this.
DeleteThat is so true, LOL! I see you caught my 'ate' Nice one too!
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ReplyDelete"I celebrate my seasons all"
ReplyDeleteI like what you did here. And this line really helps ACCENTUATE the message. (Had to keep the "ate" vibe going.)
Lovely poem full of hope and warmth! :)
Thank you Ivy,
DeleteHey, love the addition! Good one!
I like the alliteration. Awesome poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Draug
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ReplyDeleteMeditate. Educate. Rejuvenate.
ReplyDeleteIf I ever need reminding of how language can be manipulated into a work of poetic art, I'll look no further than these 33 words. I loved this so much!
Wow!
DeleteThank you Valerie, I'm overwhelmed by your kind words.
Love what you did with the ate. a lot of wonderful wordplay here.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bjorn !
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