Trifextra: Week Ninety-Seven/ New Moon


Welcome Trifectans, friends and visitors to Trifecta Weekend challenge. Those fairies over at Trifecta would like us to use these three words to our thirty words for this challenge.  This 33 word piece is called New Moon.

myopic
dazzle  
basin

 
The lovers walked through the woods, they transformed in sunlight.   
Near the dry basin they made love.
Then the director yelled, “Cut! They need More Dazzle!”
 Pathetic, the young myopic views of vampires.


Thank you....
Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin

14 comments:

  1. Glynis, I couldn't agree more! Your ending was perfection!! Nice 33 words, my friend! You nailed this one!

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  2. Pathetic indeed.. nice finish..

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  3. Great work! If only it were just the young (sigh) ;)

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    1. I know right, there are so many women that love a vamp that sparkles! Thanks Jeremy!

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  4. They need more Dazzle! Ha - I loved that. Great job, Glynis.

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  5. These directors-never satisfied!Good one Glynis,lol!

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