Welcome Trifectans, friends and visitors to Trifecta Weekend challenge. Those fairies over at Trifecta would like us to use these three words to our thirty words for this challenge. This 33 word piece is called New Moon.
myopic
dazzle
basin
The lovers walked through the woods, they transformed in
sunlight.
Near the dry basin they made love.
Then the director yelled, “Cut! They need More Dazzle!”
Pathetic, the young
myopic views of vampires.
Thank you....
Copyright © 2013 Glynis Rankin
Ha! Love your ending line.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kelly!
DeleteGlynis, I couldn't agree more! Your ending was perfection!! Nice 33 words, my friend! You nailed this one!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Valerie!
DeletePathetic indeed.. nice finish..
ReplyDeleteThank you steph!
DeleteGreat work! If only it were just the young (sigh) ;)
ReplyDeleteI know right, there are so many women that love a vamp that sparkles! Thanks Jeremy!
DeleteThey need more Dazzle! Ha - I loved that. Great job, Glynis.
ReplyDeleteThat you so much Momo!!
DeleteThese directors-never satisfied!Good one Glynis,lol!
ReplyDeleteSo true Atreyee! Thanks !
DeleteHa.. you went vampyric too
ReplyDeleteYours was much better! Thanks Bjorn!
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