tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post904834742637691461..comments2023-04-14T07:53:25.401-05:00Comments on Imaginings: Five Sentence Fiction/Neglectfulnessglynis rankinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10588421769362096375noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-14085276650877532882013-12-18T21:55:37.758-06:002013-12-18T21:55:37.758-06:00Perhaps aspiritofsimplicity....LOL!! That's ce...Perhaps aspiritofsimplicity....LOL!! That's certainly another way to look at it.<br />Thank you!glynis rankinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10588421769362096375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-25679011302403597832013-12-18T21:31:42.215-06:002013-12-18T21:31:42.215-06:00Thank you so much consciouscacophony ! Thank you so much consciouscacophony ! glynis rankinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10588421769362096375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-1558708014466783652013-12-18T04:16:28.801-06:002013-12-18T04:16:28.801-06:00She doesn't sound as if she gave him very much...She doesn't sound as if she gave him very much encouragement. Perhaps he wasn't lazy or neglectful. Perhaps he was looking for more pleasant company.aspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-4396109979342321512013-12-16T00:17:38.314-06:002013-12-16T00:17:38.314-06:00This is great, Glynis---"a lonely monument to...This is great, Glynis---"a lonely monument to a life of neglectfulness"---what a haunting line. And I love that she's sitting there ignoring his persistent knocking because she told him not to forget his keys. Ooh. Such an emotionally charged story in so few words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-38053956798277763682013-12-15T22:57:11.325-06:002013-12-15T22:57:11.325-06:00You're quite welcome. Hope to be reading more...You're quite welcome. Hope to be reading more of your responses here.<br />Have a GREAT WEEK !!! :-) :-) :-)Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-50021102565379316532013-12-15T22:22:41.188-06:002013-12-15T22:22:41.188-06:00Neglectfulness with a touch of laziness perhaps? ...Neglectfulness with a touch of laziness perhaps? :) )) <br />Thank you Robin!glynis rankinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10588421769362096375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4428191920946858254.post-12855454932782429232013-12-15T18:23:26.060-06:002013-12-15T18:23:26.060-06:00I liked what you wrote here. However, I wouldn'...I liked what you wrote here. However, I wouldn't chuck it up to being neglectful, I'd said "it's a lonely monument to a life of LAZINESS." I also see you've got a slight wicked revengeful nature here concerning the keys. :-D :-D :-DRobin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.com